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I've fallen out of favour
And I've fallen from grace
Fallen out of trees
And I've fallen on my face
Fallen out of taxis
Out of windows too
Fell in your opinion
When I fell in love with you

Sometimes I wish for falling
Wish for the release
Wish for falling through the air
To give me some relief
Because falling's not the problem
When I'm falling I'm at peace
It's only when I hit the ground
It causes all the grief


I threw this together for a contest at my school. All I know is that the theme is "What Makes You Happy" and it has to be school appropriate. The later part of that statement killed most of my ideas. I decided to be kitschy and make a representation of Florence + The Machine's "Falling" [link] . I think I will probably do a bigger, better, and more colorful version of this later.

The Chinese at the bottom should say "Don't hit the ground." I had to use google translate; so, if it is not correct and you could correct me, that would be much appreciated. I apologize for any offences this may cause.

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=Kai-ni Dec 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Congrats on getting second in the contest... but seeing the first place winner, you should have gotten first XDDD


I think I won third, but there were two pieces of art hung by the word 'THIRD' so... I'm not actually sure. perhaps it was a tie.
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=BeiHuiNing Dec 1, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! I think that collage piece should have gotten more recognition... It probably had more time put into it and turned out as one of the best pieces... No offence to the artist that got first ^^;

I don't really have any idea about that third place... Hopefully they'll announce the winners sometime.
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=Kai-ni Dec 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I don't like the first place D: I think you should have pulled first, the collage second, and me third.

I didn't place, actually. :( Made me sad.
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~twilight-darksider Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
alright my attempt at a serious critique.

The woman at the top its beautiful, her hands look amazing and her face seems so clm just falling there like that, her waist is a bit too tiny seeming though. Then this is more an idea, her one shoe thats on mabyou could tweek it to 'about to fall off' I feel the gravity would pull it off other wise.

Then the violenist looks amazing cant find anything to fix there but the man on the (chello i think?) his neck is a bit long, I love the mask though he seems so mysterious with it, and the fact the men on he bottom are unaware of the woman about to crash on them is nice.

Great wonderful amazing work yellow. <3
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=BeiHuiNing Nov 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
And happy Thanksgiving!
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~twilight-darksider Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you too <3
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=BeiHuiNing Nov 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you so much for these critiques~ I don't get comments very often, so yours are always a huge help. :)

I love your idea about the shoe falling off. I think I'll try to change that when I get the picture back. I'll also try to fix her waist and the cellist's neck. I wish I had noticed that earlier! >,o

Thank you again! :sun:
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~twilight-darksider Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
im so glad I could be helpfull ;u;

your welcome, will you post your next version too?
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=BeiHuiNing Nov 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I definitely will post the next version if I ever make it happen. I probably won't give it a shot until I'm in, like, college or later though. xd
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~twilight-darksider Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww :<
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